Response+-+Education+Group

from christina-Wow-it Looks AWESOME-so professional-you rock!

Hey Melinda, here is the reformated one.

11/18 Hi Maria. I don't see an updated document with the formatting changes you made. Here is my final version. I may go ahead and post this because I don't want it to be late, but if you have one that looks better feel free to go behind me and update our submission. Someone else did that already for another teams submission. - Melinda



11/18 1:34 Maria: Hey melinda, I'm adding a photo to the coverpage and making some other design changes right now in case you go in and look at it. hope you don't mind. :)

11/17 11:34pm Michelle: Hey Melinda, I just took Maria's posted file and just added my additions through the track changes. I also updated the deliverables and charts/tables Katie's referring to in here so you don't have to worry about them. Basically this file should contain all the comments/edits between Katie, Maria, and myself. :)

11/17 9:23pm Maria: Hello. Attached are my edits (using Tracked Changes) to the education proposal. If you haven't already started to look at the doc Melinda posted, it might be a good idea to look at this version and just add your changes to it, that way Melinda doesn't have 4 different versions with tracked changes to fix tomorrow. And by all means, if you don't like my suggested changes as you look it over---change them. LOL :) I did a lot of formatting changes (suggested of course) and in some cases had to turn off the track changes so I could see how it was looking (i.e. putting stakeholders in a chart).

11/17 8:51 Katie- Hello. I don't have too many comments regarding this proposal. My only suggestions are to make sure that the listed items are bulleted and to the table in the Deliverables section. I'm not sure if you grabbed the table from the google doc. If so, I posted a Word doc on our Wiki homepage for the table, the timeline figure, and the chart graphics (google docs messed up the formatting and the quality is poor on those items). I'll post it again here:

Otherwise, great job!



11/6 10:18 pm Katie: Hi everyone, I posted my sections on the Education Google Doc. You’ll notice that my sections for the education group details different information compared to the business group. This is because the education group offered widely different information. For example, the deliverables section of the education group clearly described the deliverables they wanted and the information it would contain. Therefore, I created a section that addressed those deliverables in terms of how the companies would *use* those deliverables. Contrary, for the business proposal, I had to provide the information the company would expect for each deliverable. I’m having this same issue with losing the formatting for the table, chart, and timeline figure. The quality is pretty bad because I had to save them as a picture in PowerPoint and then insert them into GoogleDoc. Anyway, as with the other proposals, I will send the final version of the graphics/charts via Word doc. to be included in our final version.